Will & Whit - Laura Lee Gulledge

I thought the art was great and loved the idea that the art goes to gray scale once a blackout occurs due to a storm half way through the comic. The trouble is I can't really tell you what the story is about. Yes, there are several teenage characters, many who have nice quirkiness to them, that are all dealing with their own concerns during a summer break (Will, the female protagonist, has an actual "real" problems), yet there is no true plot that drives the story--sorry, unrequited love and the existence of carnival don't count, and while dealing with loss could, it isn't made into a plot. Neither does the fear of shadows, nor the fact that the characters have their own talents count as plot, although these things could also be turned into story lines. It is this lack of story that drove me away from truly enjoying the work, and while the author is attempting to turn the work into a stage piece I think she is going to have zero luck without a major rewrite.