The Pencils: I wasn't quite happy with the layout, so I made it so Colimbo advances on Montressor (visually in the lower half of the page) while Montressor gets closer and smaller at the same time (upper half). I also made C's hands more prominent, since "hands" is the point of this page. I was pretty happy with the pencils.
The Final image: The inks really changed the page even more. It's not quite what I wanted, especially as I ran out of my good ink and had to use a more watery kind (for Colimbo--I inked his panels 2nd). But overall, it's close to what I imagined.