Drawing Board: Bugman

I pretty happy with this idea, and I'm reasonably happy with the text; but I'm a bit uncertain on the pacing (number of panels).

Title: the Amazing Bug-Man in "The Decision"

P1)

Caption: Bug-Man's in a Jam.

Bug-Man: Hello? Dr. Konners? Hey, It's Bug-Man.

P2)

Konners: Buggy! Hi! What can I do for you?

P3)

B: Well, I hate to bother you, but I have a dilemma that only someone with your unique skills can solve.

K: No problem, come right over! I can never repay you for all the times you saved me and my family from the horrors of The Reptile.

P4)

B: Cool! see you soon!

P5)

B: Ouch! My insect senses!

P6)

B: What the fuck am I thinking!? Konners is a great guy, but every time I see him, it's like he turns into the Reptile the next damn day.

P7)

B: Screw it! I got enough shit in my life! I'm gonna go see Rick Richards.

P8)

K: What the hell am I thinking? Buggy's a great guy, but every goddamn time I see him, it's like I turn into the Reptile the next fuckin' day.

P9)

K: Screw it! I got enough grief in my life. Hey, Steve, if you see Bug-Man, tell him I had to leave!

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