Z is for "Zoloft"

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Cej sez:

Depression is Fun 1) I think this is a great idea, and I look forward to more installments. 

2) I like the big Z.  I know you don’t want to do this over and over again, but I like most of the layout here, and I recommend that the other letters follow a similar (not necessarily exactly the same) format.  That is, big letter, some text in the lower corner, and some pictures in the right side.  You could even do little cartoons on the page—2 or three panel things

3) Your little zoloft boy looks great

Take a Chill Pill 1) I didn’t really catch the resonance between the pill and the boy.  I think it would have been stronger if a) they were the same size, b) the boy’s head were tilted to the left (like the pill), and/or c) his eyes were in the same spot/shape as the o’s in the word zoloft.

2) In your NFTB, you talk about how “the solution IS the problem.”  I think that you’re largely right, but I don’t think it quite comes through.  Is there a way to make these things “fun” but to still convey a rant; or is the very nature of this format too simple for an in-depth discussion of the collapse of society?  It’s 2 in the morning, so I may not be making much sense….

Depth Suggestions: I don’t think you need a # on the pill.  Better to draw two circles slightly off from each other and then connect them.  Erase the part of the 2nd circle that would fall behind the first.  This probably isn’t making sense either.  I should just draw you a picture…